http://exhibits.library.stonybrook.edu/mfp/files/original/a7592e70f05c8a66b15585c20c373ef4.pdf a7804fe0b0b266a2e2e59f09ccb88dd2 PDF Text Text v January 10. l968 Miss Karon Slotky Copy Editing flepartment American Monica Association 535 horth Deartorn Street Chicago. Illinois 60610 war ~wwm..wr:wrmwm- Dear Kiss Slotky: I am returning the text of our report ”Longuncting Depot Phenothiazina Treatment of Psychosis,“ which is to appear in the forthcoming issue of the Aachivea og Gaaaaat Raychzatag. rsmuv'u Please change the 0:" Wm.”- The «v.3,- .A- name of the coauthor to Turan M. Itil. M.o. address listed is a permanent address. V. wm. With regard to the reference now numbered l6, this appears The original text is incorrect and reference l5 ei page be 2t. 0: s.ou . l967 l 0. The personal communication of reference There are minor corrections in the In Table text 11 was oral, July 22, on pages 1, 2. 9 and ”yaars" for average number of ambiguous. That should be deleted. I, tho subscript hospitalizations is In other regards the text appears correct. Finally. I believe the layout can be improved. The layout shows the report beginning on the left side of the page. This is awkward and if at all possible. perhaps this report should two of the results and the start on the right side. Paragraph 4 do go together. If we start on figure which now is on page a right~hand page than the first paragraphs of the rasults will appear on a page facing the figure. I would also suggest a realignment of those pages so that tho figure and the legend �Miss Slotky «2- January 10, l968 appear on the upper left~nand side. in the location on page 3 where Table 1!! now appears. By continuing the copy so that extends on the loner half of the left column and the upper it half of the right column. Table of the right column of page 3. 111 can occupy the lower half For page 4. Table IV might suitably occupy the upper righthand part of the page so that the text fills in the left side and all of the left column. The comment would then appear under Table IV and would continue to page 5. It would not be necessary to change page 5. if the recommendations for page The reprint order is enclosed are unsatisfactory an: in the lower half of page 4 filling out the right-hand corner, allowing the copy to complete the left side and the upper right part of the page. alternate approach is to h , “am“. ,.,‘. .— _-;<« .n .urv _ -, :- will follow. 4 have Table IV and a formal purchase order r, Thank you very much “urea-wry; for your assistance. Sincerely yours . Fink, ".0. Professor of Psychiatry Max MF:kp � Dublin Core The Dublin Core metadata element set is common to all Omeka records, including items, files, and collections. For more information see, http://dublincore.org/documents/dces/. Title A name given to the resource Correspondence Text A resource consisting primarily of words for reading. Examples include books, letters, dissertations, poems, newspapers, articles, archives of mailing lists. Note that facsimiles or images of texts are still of the genre Text. Dublin Core The Dublin Core metadata element set is common to all Omeka records, including items, files, and collections. For more information see, http://dublincore.org/documents/dces/. Title A name given to the resource Correspondence to: Slotky, Karen Type The nature or genre of the resource Text Identifier An unambiguous reference to the resource within a given context mfp-05-00-022-1-130 Date A point or period of time associated with an event in the lifecycle of the resource 1968 Creator An entity primarily responsible for making the resource <a title="Fink, Max, 1923-" href="http://id.loc.gov/authorities/names/n79039548" target="_blank">Fink, Max, 1923-</a> Subject The topic of the resource Correspondence -- Correspondence Relation A related resource The Max Fink Collection Description An account of the resource Rights Information about rights held in and over the resource <a title="IN COPYRIGHT - EDUCATIONAL USE PERMITTED" href="http://rightsstatements.org/vocab/InC-EDU/1.0/" target="_blank">IN COPYRIGHT - EDUCATIONAL USE PERMITTED</a> Source A related resource from which the described resource is derived Special Collections and University Archives, University Libraries. Stony Brook University Libraries (State University of New York). Language A language of the resource en-US Format The file format, physical medium, or dimensions of the resource application/pdf Publisher An entity responsible for making the resource available Contributor An entity responsible for making contributions to the resource Correspondence