http://exhibits.library.stonybrook.edu/mfp/files/original/4e266e8c4318802276c31044f0315c90.pdf 9dff33e9e972136fd8989c0eedf139fe PDF Text Text . . Jammy 18, "mam-w V:',vc"nmu'. 4"" 1968 Miss Karen Slotky Copy Editing Department Meal American Associatim 535 North Dearborn Street Chicago, Illinois 60610 WWW»7«W‘<1'z‘waywavxe-ww A Dear Miss Slotky: I am writing with regard to the report "Long—Acting Depot Phenothiazim Treement of Psychosis." My associates in St. Louis have reviewed the paper and I an enclosing pages which they feel warrant correction. _ «ray-W 'W ' The page nunbers referred to are your page numbers, marked in the upper right hand corner. On page It, the last line of paragraph lshouldmsd’WtoQSmeks." InpamgraphZ, tmelinesfmthe bottan delete "(Table 2)." The last sentence should be changed by deleting "disoonfort and secondary" and replacing by "eutrspyrmnidal." 'I‘i-‘AWUW'TW 64" l'. On page 5, the paragraphs require a few changes and these are the attached page 5. marked on principal changes are in the results and I have taken the liberty of retyping pages 6 and 7. Following your editing, please use these to substitute for all of 6 and most of page 7 up to the portion marked secondary effects. On page 8 , we Nomad suggest that paragraphs be deleted foam the section starting "10 patients in group Eb" and "9 patients in The group 2" . Similarly, the section on page 9 "there was no weight loss" is logically a continuation of the previous paragraph. _ In the smmsry, in paragraph 2, the third line should be charged to read "discmrgeable, and seven did not improve. The” (the word secondary should be deleted). �-2- Miss Slotky January 18, 1968 Finally, the tables have became inverted and table 3 should 2 and table 2 shwld be marked table 3. m1: is, 2 in Individual Symptoms with Fluphenazine "Changes table is Decanoate" and table 3 is "Mode and Outoane of Treatment." be mrked table Thank you for your cooperation. Sincerely yours , Max Firm, M.D. Professor of Psychiatry MF:kp � Dublin Core The Dublin Core metadata element set is common to all Omeka records, including items, files, and collections. For more information see, http://dublincore.org/documents/dces/. Title A name given to the resource Correspondence Text A resource consisting primarily of words for reading. Examples include books, letters, dissertations, poems, newspapers, articles, archives of mailing lists. Note that facsimiles or images of texts are still of the genre Text. Dublin Core The Dublin Core metadata element set is common to all Omeka records, including items, files, and collections. For more information see, http://dublincore.org/documents/dces/. Title A name given to the resource Correspondence to: Slotky, Karen Type The nature or genre of the resource Text Identifier An unambiguous reference to the resource within a given context mfp-05-00-022-1-110 Date A point or period of time associated with an event in the lifecycle of the resource 1968 Creator An entity primarily responsible for making the resource <a title="Fink, Max, 1923-" href="http://id.loc.gov/authorities/names/n79039548" target="_blank">Fink, Max, 1923-</a> Subject The topic of the resource Correspondence -- Correspondence Relation A related resource The Max Fink Collection Description An account of the resource Rights Information about rights held in and over the resource <a title="IN COPYRIGHT - EDUCATIONAL USE PERMITTED" href="http://rightsstatements.org/vocab/InC-EDU/1.0/" target="_blank">IN COPYRIGHT - EDUCATIONAL USE PERMITTED</a> Source A related resource from which the described resource is derived Special Collections and University Archives, University Libraries. Stony Brook University Libraries (State University of New York). Language A language of the resource en-US Format The file format, physical medium, or dimensions of the resource application/pdf Publisher An entity responsible for making the resource available Contributor An entity responsible for making contributions to the resource Correspondence